Analysis of Looking For a Corner



Round and round and round I go
Looking for a corner that doesen't exist
Inhibited feelings stop to flow
My whole being locked in my own fist

I. I see you smiling
I see you laughing
Do you really mean it?
This happiness.. Is this real?

I've forgotten how to feel
Yet some undefinable emotion survives
Don't know what's the real deal
These fake smiles and muffled cries

Love was a beautiful dream for a while
But that is all it was. A dream
The lies that I fed myself in guile
Truth can be ugly. Do you want to scream?

Feel free
Be my guest
Please no pretense
I request
I want to see
Who you are
Sun, moon
or a broken star

Write your obituary
and become what you want it to read
Life will be legendary
You will have all that you need

But what if I really don't give a f*ck
In existantialism I'm stuck
Is there a way to find a corner in a circle?

Round and round and round I go
Looking for a corner that doesen't exist
Inhibited feelings stop to flow
My whole being locked in my own fist


Scheme ABAB ccxd dxdx efef ghxhgixi gxgx axx ABAB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (34%)
Metre 1010111 1010101101 010010111 111010111 111110 11110 111011 1100111 1010111 11101001 111011 1110101 1101001101 11111101 01111101 1111011111 11 111 1101 101 1111 111 11 10101 110100 001111111 111100 1111111 11111011011 0111 1101110100010 1010111 1010101101 010010111 111010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 950
Words 197
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 08, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wishu Sindhu

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