Analysis of In Love With A Hot Goth Chick



i'm in love with a gothic girl
who wears a necklace full of pearls
she's drop dead gorgeous
and oh so morbid

she erupts with shrieks and screams every morning
her eyes glistens when her favorite band is touring
i've never met a girl more sarcastic
she's pretty, petite, and oh so poetic

she always bluffs but i call her every night
to see if she wants to go out and have a bite
i've severed my arms one too many times
by believing all of her filthy lies

it's tough love but we'll make it work
we'll find ways to get past all the hurt
we're a match made in the boiling pits of hell
survival of the sickest, only time will tell


Scheme XXXX AABB CCXX XXDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 10110101 11010111 11110 01110 11110110010 011101001110 1101011010 11001011010 11111101001 111111110101 1101111101 1010110101 11111111 111111101 10110010111 010101010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 610
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on August 27, 2015

Modified on April 04, 2023

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