Analysis of Immortalized
Nightly, including my dreams
As far back, I believe
Sounds, her calling me
Sounds of seduction
Following, the dream
Still plaguing me
Small seaside town est. 1635
Sleep the day away until bout five
Siren's seduction pierces Newburyport's sky
Drawing me closer to her cry
Midnight-ish, overgrown oak lined roads
Samhain Blue moon, erodes
Not knowing the significance
Her longing explodes
Abruptly brake, fear of hitting the gates
Rear end slightly slides to the right
Not a mistake
And I see imbedded in the stone pillar
Mouth of the devil open wide as a river
I realize, Hell's Gate
The siren calls her mate
Seductively dancing beyond the gate
Practically floating, I'm at her feet
Drop to my knees, confessed my love for thee
She kisses my neck
Bites and sucks, flashback of my death
The seduction rushes
As I realize I'm immortalized
From everlasting death
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Scheme | X X A X X A B X C C D D X D X X X E E B B B X A X F X X F X |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (30%) Etheree (20%) |
Metre | 1001011 111101 10101 11010 10001 1101 11101 101010111 1010111 10110101 1101111 11101 11000100 01001 0101111001 11101101 1001 01101000110 110101011010 11011 010101 0100100101 100101101 1111011111 11011 1011111 001010 111010100 10101 10110110001001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 966 |
Words | 165 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 30 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 25 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 5 |
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Submitted on July 23, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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