Analysis of Immortalized



Nightly, including my dreams

As far back, I believe

Sounds, her calling me

Sounds of seduction

Following, the dream

Still plaguing me

Small seaside town est. 1635

Sleep the day away until bout five

Siren's seduction pierces Newburyport's sky

Drawing me closer to her cry

Midnight-ish, overgrown oak lined roads

Samhain Blue moon, erodes

Not knowing the significance

Her longing explodes

Abruptly brake, fear of hitting the gates

Rear end slightly slides to the right

Not a mistake

And I see imbedded in the stone pillar

Mouth of the devil open wide as a river

I realize, Hell's Gate

The siren calls her mate

Seductively dancing beyond the gate

Practically floating, I'm at her feet

Drop to my knees, confessed my love for thee

She kisses my neck

Bites and sucks, flashback of my death

The seduction rushes

As I realize I'm immortalized

From everlasting death

Copyright © 2011-2012 All Rights Reserved Peddling Creativity Inc..


Scheme X X A X X A B X C C D D X D X X X E E B B B X A X F X X F X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1001011 111101 10101 11010 10001 1101 11101 101010111 1010111 10110101 1101111 11101 11000100 01001 0101111001 11101101 1001 01101000110 110101011010 11011 010101 0100100101 100101101 1111011111 11011 1011111 001010 111010100 10101 10110110001001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 966
Words 165
Sentences 2
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on July 23, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phillip Michael

Phillip Michaelhttps://twitter.com/#!/PMReincarnatedWriter/Poet/average guy sharing raw talent however; I cover a vast range of topics from love, tributes, seduction, vampires, and gory. Inspiration is all-over. I follow no formal techniques or anything. I write the way I think. Currently live in Portland Maine · visit my blog at http://poetryreincarnated.blogspot.com/Copyright © 2011-2012 All Rights Reserved Peddling Creativity Inc.. more…

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