Analysis of I Saw Heaven



I Saw Heaven while living in Hell !
Wife is the warden , home is my cell .
Her nagging is the my punishment never
seem to end !
Can't get a word in , just wont win .
I Saw Heaven Chain Gain you know, must
do my time children to raise I know !
So I Stay Here In Hell , the warden hold the
key, when the children are grown,
I Saw Heaven and then I will be set free !


Scheme AABCDEFGHI
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111011001 110101111 01010110010 111 11010111 111011111 111101111 11110101010 1101011 11100111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 355
Words 75
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 268
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Submitted on April 02, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Coy Day

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