Analysis of I miss you right here beside me (Lyrics)– By Mohamed Fazloon



I miss you right here beside me – By Mohamed Fazloon

As I hear you whisper in my ears,
Oh baby this love is not for the first time,
It last forever and ever until we die,
Now that I miss you,
Like the summer goodbyes and winter chills out,
Baby can't you see that I need you?
Oh baby, baby, I wish you were here with me.
Oh baby, baby, I miss you right here beside me,

Chorus:
Even when the world smiles my love for you so tender,
Even if I had all the money my love for you will never die,
I'd rather have you right beside me than all the wealth beside me,
Oh baby, baby, I wish you were here with me.
Oh baby, baby, I miss you right here beside me,

Stars are so bright when we share the dreams together,
We used to have long rides while we celebrate the joy of love,
We used share the same coffee and the breakfast together,
We used celebrate the vision of love,
Oh baby, baby, I wish you were here with me.
Oh baby, baby, I miss you right beside me.

It's so funny when distance between us are miles away,
The furthest I've been my heart is so close to you baby,
I wish that you are here with me,
I wish that we are together,
Oh baby, baby, I wish you were here with me.
Oh baby, baby, I miss you right beside me.

Chorus:
Even when the world smiles my love for you so tender,
Even if I had all the money my love for you will never die,
I rather have you right beside me than all the wealth beside me,
Oh baby, baby, I wish you were here with me.
Oh baby, baby, I miss you right here beside me,

Repeat chorus twice.

Written on 9/11/2012


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Characters 1,505
Words 316
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 6, 6, 6, 6, 1, 1
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Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
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Submitted on June 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:36 min read
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Mohamed Fazloon

My Personal profile:I belong to a gem merchant family. I began writing poetry since I was in my fifth grade. I completed my London Ordinary level and London Advanced level in 1998. I also completed my diploma in business management and I finally attained my Bachelors degree B.com in marketing - U.S.A - 2009.My Achievements:1) Won the Editors choice award from International Library of Poetry UK -1997.2) Member of the International society of poets.3) Won many awards at school for best poetry writing - 1995-1998.4) Many poems been published in local newspapers and magazines - 1995-2000. 5) Most valuable poet - poetry.com - 20126) Poet Laureate - Poetry.com - 20127) Legendary Poet - Poetry.com -2012 more…

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