Analysis of I miss my dad so much



daddy daddy daddy
why do u do this to me
why do u hate me daddy
are you always so angry
with me.i wish i could
know u better.all this pain
that i have to feel why cant
a pretend pretend that life
is good pretend that there isnt
all this pain but i still love
you daddy.
Why did you have to go?
Why did you say good-bye to me.
Why did you left me here with
all of this pain i have in side
of me dad.
Why?
Why?
When i have kids I want them to
to have a dad in there life.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 101010 1111111 1111110 111110 11111 11111 1111111 0010111 1101111 1111111 110 111111 11111111 1111111 11111101 111 1 1 11111111 1101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 450
Words 108
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 354
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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