Analysis of I Hate This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Bombs bursting,
Guns blowing.
What brought the world to this?
It's as if everyone's heart stopped glowing.

It's really sweet what Veterans do,
But I have to say, I don't like it.
I mean, bullets flying overhead?
Sleeping in a pit??

War is sick, evil.
And I just don't want to have anything to do with it.
I have to admit, my family's been and is in it,
But, I can't make myself okay with it and just sit.

Why does everyone fight over the DUMBEST things???

Pulling loved ones apart,
Young children mourning...
Can't you see
It's just plain annoying????


Scheme AAXA XBXB XBBB X XAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 110 110 110111 111101110 110111001 111111111 111010101 10001 11110 0111111101111 11101110010101 11111111011 11101100101 101101 11010 111 111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 535
Words 101
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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doodlegirl

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