Analysis of forbidden love



You r young & so am i
& this.. is wrong

we're one mistake from being together
but let's not ask why it's not right
perhaps, who am i to judge?

we r young & i was scared
now, you're wise beyond ur years
but i.. i don't care
and i can still feel you heartbeat
you know exactly where to teake me
even thought u live a 1000 miles away
from me...

will u remember me?
remember what i said?
Oh, but... how could i forget..
we're one mistake from being together...

Oh, how could i forget..
after every end comes a new beginning

i learned the truth at 17..
that love was meant for beauty kings & queens..
and so did the king find his queen
at 16 going on 17

"the mistake has been sloved.."


Scheme xx Abx xxxxcxc cxdA dx xxxx b
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111 1101110010 11111111 0111111 111111 1110111 11111 0111111 110101111 101110101 11 110101 010111 1111101 1101110010 111101 101001101010 11011 111111011 01101111 1101 001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 658
Words 139
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 7, 4, 2, 4, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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