Analysis of Finding Me



Finding me in the dark,
enemies fade,
and I'm no longer the mark.
My heart seeping with agony and pain,
My demons washed away from the rain.
A tear shed for friends I once knew,
if only something worked I carried through.
Finding me in the shadows of blue,
taking blames for things untrue.
People falling all around,
a thorny rose bleeds on the ground.
Finding me where did I go,
so ashamed with nothing to show.
The wind gently blowing through my hair,
finding me when nothing is there.
Finding me with nothing stored,
cutting emotions with a sharp sword.
Finding me where were you?
Flying to heaven to the world of new.
Finding me not wanting to fight,
Finding me trying with all my might.
Finding me would be a really good start,
Finding me with an unbroken heart.


Scheme ABACCDDDDEEFFGGHHDDIIJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 101001 1001 0111001 1110110001 110101101 01111111 1101011101 10100111 1011101 1010101 01011101 1011111 10111011 011010111 10111011 1011101 100101011 101101 1011010111 10111011 101101111 1011101011 101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 745
Words 141
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 603
Words per stanza (avg) 141
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Submitted on November 09, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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