Analysis of Finally as poem



It always happens
Some of the ideas misses even
Not by default
But by not strongly built

Many ideas cross over mind
They must be immediately placed
In its place and stored
Else it may soon vapor

I found many times
Same situation sometimes
But I may note down title and forget
So next day those ideas are brought out

It so happens
They are not remembered even
When you try to recollect
With pen in hand and start

Remember it was treasure
Once missed means gone for ever
That piece is lost and not to strike again
It will be hidden treasure and may remain

It is personal experience
Keep no thought for tomorrow by chance
It will never occur to find in poem's form

It must be made finally as poem


Scheme ABXX XXXC DDXX ABXX CCXX XXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1100101010 1101 111101 100101101 111010001 01101 111110 11101 101001 1111110001 1111010111 1110 11101010 111101 110101 0101110 1111110 1111011101 11110100101 111000100 11110111 11100111011 1111100110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 670
Words 133
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on October 06, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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