Analysis of Edge of the Porch



Because it was what we thought

was meant by family: Laughter.

A new house. A party in the garden

where the tables were filled with young faces.

Who did not want this true

and tender accomplishment? This just

reward handed over to the world’s honest men,

its citizens. Every house

rested on its joys. So when one of the guests

nudged a glass when she was telling a joke

which fell on the floor and broke,

we laughed. We were accountable

merely for our own mistakes and

committed solely. And everything was

part of the good story, really.

How could we not love what it cost?

Crack on the marble floor just set,

dent on a polished

kitchen door. A small window

overlooks the children, one nimble,

one frail, balancing on the far

edge of the porch.


Scheme X X X X X X X X X A A B X X X X X X X B X X
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 11110010 0110100010 1010011110 111111 010010011 011010101101 11001001 10111111101 1011111001 1110101 11100100 101101010 0101000101 11011010 11111111 11010111 11010 1010110 10010110 11100101 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 724
Words 137
Sentences 13
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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