Analysis of dents blanches et la peau brune



dents blanches et la peau brune
(White teeth and brown skin.)

Hi Lovely
salut belle

juste jogging
assis dans mon sous-vêtements mouillés,
et de vous envoyer une étreinte d'ours humide
demain est le jour de mon exercice favori.

je marche en ville pour un café
mangé un piment poblano.
à un nouveau resto mexicain de la nuit dernière.,
bon. boire un whisky-soda
ma nouvelle boisson

Maintenant, je vais passer à l'étage
et prendre une demi-heure de bronzage.
dents blanches et la peau brune
votre chiot devient un homme dangereux

étreint ma douce.

Hi Lovely
salut belle

Just jogged.
Sitting in my wet underwear
and sending you a wet bear hug.
Tomorrow is my favorite exercise day.

I walk into town to a café.
Ate a chile poblano
at a New Mexican resto last night.
Good. Drank a whisky and soda.
My new drink.

Now I will sit upstairs
and catch a half hour of tanning.
White teeth and brown skin.
your puppy is becoming a dangerous man.

Hugs my sweet.

©anna laurencio /2014
06.27.14/fri.sf


Scheme AB CD efgh ijhga kkAf f CD ghxg ijggx xeBx g fi
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11011 110 11 110 11111111 1111111101 0101011111 1111111 111010 1110111111 1111010 111 1111011 11110111 111111 111111 111 110 11 11 1001110 01010111 0111100101 11011101 1010010 1011001011 11010010 111 111101 010110110 11011 110101001001 111 101 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,026
Words 186
Sentences 26
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 4, 5, 4, 1, 2, 4, 5, 4, 1, 2
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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