Analysis of DADS and DEADBEAT DADS



The defference between dads and deadbeats
Is that dads provides for their child
They protect and will destroy for them
And deadbeats put theirs in denial
Dads teach their children right from wrong
And surpports them even after their're grown
They let their children know their're never along
And deadbeats sing the same old song
Dads wipe their childrens snotty nose
They make formulas and change diapers too
They'll make them breakfast lunch and dinner
And thats something that deadbeats can't do
Dads teach their children the golden rule
He makes sure that his child go to school
He wiill prerare his children for a better life
And deadbeats are degrading and fools
Dads are fathers who are dependable men
Their children are their kingdom com
A dad will kill and die for his children
And deadbeats are cowards and dumb
I know that I am a real good dad
And a father I've never ever had
Deadbeats are men who's souls are dead
And If your a deadbeat your *ss ls sad


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101101 11101111 101010111 01110010 11110111 0111010111 111101111001 0110111 1111011 11100011001 111101010 01101111 111100101 111111111 11111010101 01101001 11101101001 11011101 0111011110 0111001 111110111 0010110101 1111111 0110111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 941
Words 173
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 785
Words per stanza (avg) 173
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Submitted on September 01, 2015

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Theodore Chambers

Hi everyone my name is Teddy or Winkeye.I call myself a selfproclaimed poet.To be truthful i dont know if i am or not and i'll never stop writing.I started in jail 1995,with religious poems to romatic,children,mourning,ect.My fovorite are my religious poems.Im a black single male with six children and three grand,ages 42,37,34,and three 20 year old by three different women.I'll be 59 0n March 28,2012,this poem is based on some of my life and death situations.Its about how i've felted God's presence knowing that he is real.This poem LORD I'VE NEVER SAW YOUR FACE,is about God sparing my life time after time.Its about me never seeing Him,but knowing that He is real through JESUS and the HOLY SPIRIT. more…

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