Analysis of Beautiful Butterfly!



As the rain falls from the sky,
I start my journey into flight,
My wings are spread, with colors of a rainbow, so beautiful and bright,
The wind beneath them, I glide though the air, free as a bird,strong as the sea,
The rain begins to weigh me down,
My wings get wet,
Fear begins to hit me, scared of what is happening,
Will I be strong enough to make it down safely,
Will I show everyone that I am strong, and that I can do anything that I
dream of,
Or will it be all gone,
Like  a flash of lighting stunning the earth,
Once second noticed,
The next it is all gone,
A memory that is forgotten,
A soul lost without love,
What happened to the beauty of my wings,
The power I felt as the wind was beneath my wings,
I thought nothing could bring me down,
Turns out she has too much power,
I was doing this for her,
I wanted her to be proud,
Trying to land safely, But there is too much power over me,

I land,
My wing is broken,
I can't move,
I am scared,
I failed at what I wanted to achive,
I need help,
Need to be fixed,
My colors are not bright anymore,
My feelings are not taken into heart,
I am fragile, and can't take the pain anymore,
I am giving up, feeling wrothless now,
Someone has walked all over me and I am ashamed at who I am,
Hoping someone will walk by and be able to fix me,

I look up and see a gental soul approuching  me,
They place me in there arms as they look over my broken wing,
They tell me I am strong and powerful and can do anything that I put my mind to,
She places out the palm of her hand,
As I sit there impatiantly,
I start to flapmy flap my wings,
I start to feel powerful,
I give it my all and start to fly,
With the wind beneath my wings again,
I have now restarted my journay into flight,
Feeling so beautiful and bright.


Scheme ABBCDXECAFGXXGHFIIDJJXC KHXXFXXLXLXXC CEXKMIMAXBB
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 11110011 1111110101110001 01011111011101101 01011111 1111 1011111111100 111101111110 111101111011111011 11 111111 1011101001 11010 011111 010011010 011011 1101010111 0101110110111 11101111 11111110 1110110 1100111 1011101111110101 11 11110 111 111 111111011 111 1111 11011101 1101110011 11100110101 111011011 1111101011011111 1011110110111 1110101111 111011111101101 111111010001110111111 110101101 11111 1111111 1111100 111110111 101011101 11101011011 10110001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,711
Words 358
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 23, 13, 11
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 447
Words per stanza (avg) 120
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Submitted on September 05, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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