Analysis of Ballad of the night



Dreaming for a distant Lover
Her ideal Prince
Dancing among the stars,
Upon the velvet stage
Wearing his chivalric white clothing,
Captivating with his heavenly grace.
And she is fully dressed
Like a Priestess of Time –
A true monastic appearance in purple.
Flying to him with wings of her dream,
They waltz to the spherical music...
Under the glowing moonlight.
*
Her heart fluttering
As she dips in his arms,
He leans in for the finale,
Like in a cryptic ballad of the night.
Then, something undeclared,
Like a powerful swirl of mist
Got them frozen in time.
Like a monument that feels
No need to proclaim, yet,
Maintaining a meaning
For Love to be cherished.
*
Now all is gone...
Eclipsed by the rising sun,
Her heart burned to ashes,
Her nocturnal love lost,
In the highest of lights,
She awakes heart-broken,
For she has kissed the Prince,
Then he got frozen.
She doesn't know why,
But there is something spectacular
About frozen monuments.
She may live into one distant day
To find the answer.

Neli Fatu de Valahia
Toronto – February, 2006.


Scheme ABXXCXXDXXXE CXFEXXDXXCX XGXXXGBGXAXXA XF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 10101010 0011 100101 010101 1011110 100111001 011101 101011 01010010010 101111101 111010010 100101 1 01100 111011 11010010 1001010101 110001 10100111 111001 1010011 111011 010010 111110 1 1111 0110101 011110 001011 001011 11110 111101 11110 11011 111100100 0110100 111011101 11010 1111 010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,011
Words 185
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 38, 2
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 412
Words per stanza (avg) 93
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Submitted on March 15, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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