Analysis of Answers from Sin



sunrise sunset all of life captivated in this line of dimensions of the third
I await on the fields of the east to see the light first
I head back west to see the last glimmer of hope to quench the thirst

a relentless hunger awaiting the perfect meal
an answer to all our sins So we can heal
a connection to the infinite love so we can feel

men in tunics in examples of the divine
whose word has become lost n unknown to their mind
mortal life searching for the answer out in the fringes of the universe while one hides inside

women blamed for our holy connection of wich was mine
for it became ours shared in one wich was fine
men's animal nature realized of not wanting to share in time
for this betrayal earthly women of mother earth will Carry the gift of creation and life with them inertwined

while men with the spirit of creation and life only enlightened of the secret gift when lived alone n died

those of US with simple sin
what to do now that we've crossed the line deep within
to wait for the answer at our untimely end


Scheme ABB CCC DXE DDXA E FFX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111000111010101 10110110111011 1111110110111101 0010100100011 110111011111 00101010011111 10100101001 111011101111 10110101010010101011101 101110100101111 110110101111 1100101011101101 110101010110111001101001111 1110101010011001010101110111 1111101 111111101101 1110101100101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,016
Words 200
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 4, 1, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on August 19, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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