Analysis of A night in the view of a star and me.



The sky melts in beautiful shades
Of fuchsia, dark blue, and gold.
Slowly, the stars dot the night
One by one.
Midnight is arriving
Giving me hope.
I start to think
'What does a star think? What's it like up there?' ....

(Then, the setting changes.)

In the sky,
Watching the dark shades below me
Change and rolling hills of green become black.
'Shine bright' my mother tells me,
And I put on my best grin.
No one can shine as bright
On the dark silhouettes.
'Shine!!' my father beckons me.
Shining with my friends,
Oh what fun!
But what's it like to be a human?
Like that girl down there?


Scheme XXABXXXC X XDXDXAXDXBBC
Poetic Form
Metre 01101001 111101 1001101 111 11010 1011 1111 1101111111 101010 001 10011011 1010111011 1111011 0111111 111111 10101 1110101 10111 111 111111010 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 584
Words 114
Sentences 16
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 1, 12
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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doodlegirl

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