Analysis of no evidence

holly flame maxey 1976 (baltimore)



How can I tell you that I love you
When I do not even believe that it exists
I am a writer, a poet and a dreamer
Or I was before..
Reality overtook my brain

I can tell you that
Thoughts of you
Memories of our time together
Never leave my mind
I can tell you
When I can not communicate with you
I am overtaken by my emotions

Please release me from this time out
I swear I will repent
My horrible past and try… just try…
Please be patient

In your absence…..
Suffering is inevitable
I see no way out….
But in?


Scheme AXBXX XABXAAX CXXX XXCX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111111111 111110011101 110100100010 11101 100111 11111 111 1001101010 10111 1111 111101011 1110011010 10111111 111101 110010111 1110 0110 100101000 11111 10
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 504
Words 104
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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