Analysis of Miles Between



The current distance between us
feels like we are miles apart.
You've taken my love for granted
you had my heart right from the very start.
I know you're filled with emotions
but don't misplace the ones you had for me.
Once overjoyed with my presence
now you can't stand the very sight of me.
What happened where did we go wrong?
Where has the love you had for me now gone?
this is hard and it's killing me
I cannot take it I can barely breathe.
I'm stuck in an ocean,
I've been swept up by the strongest tide.
I'm drowning in sorrow,
there is no shore for me in sight.
I always thought we would always be
forever and always times infinity.
Don't know where this is headed,
there's now new life that you are carrying.
So regardless of what happens,
that bond between us will always be.
Wish I could travel inside your mind,
I wish you could see thru my eyes
Maybe that way it will all make sense,
as to why we are now on opposite sides of the fence.
Why am I the only one whose suffering?
these lonely hours while my hearts been yours for the offering.
What are my crimes? What am I guilty of?
for this conviction of losing your love.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 01010011 1111101 11011110 1111110101 11111010 1101011111 1011110 1111010111 11011111 1101111111 11101101 1101111101 110110 111110101 110010 11111101 1111111 0100110100 1111110 1111111100 10101110 11011111 111100111 11111111 101111111 11111111001101 11101011100 110101111110100 1111111101 1101011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,107
Words 220
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 881
Words per stanza (avg) 220
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Submitted by FFLORES21 on February 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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