Analysis of My Own Choice – Free Will
Mwanandeke Kindembo 1996 (Baraka)
You are my father and I, your son.
If you send me somewhere, I will go without a second thought nor doubt your judgment. If you demand, or ask something from me, then I shall give it to you. Considering that the thing in question is under my possession at the required time.
However, choosing and making final decisions for me means that I have become a slave and not a son. Thus, you have taken away that free-will which belongs to every individual. Or, that blessing which the Creator blessed me with; from the very beginning of the creation.
I can give up all the worldly possessions that are under my control, but never when it comes to taking away my free-will. Therefore, I wish to remain as a son to you and not a slave.
I will not trust nor allow my soul to be taken for granted, and humiliated to such a level of not making up my own choice. No man should become a master over another. Simply, because every slave must have a master, but a son needs only a father in life. Nothing more and nothing less!
Scheme | A X A X X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111100111 11111111010101111101101111011111111101001010101101010100101 10100101001011111101010101111100111110111000100111010010111101001010010 11111010010111010111011111001111111101101110101 111110111111011000100110101110111111101010100101001100111010101110010011010101 |
Characters | 1,008 |
Words | 193 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 5 |
Letters per line (avg) | 158 |
Words per line (avg) | 39 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 158 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
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