Analysis of To us

Brenda Hunt 1976 (Florida)



I could count the ways I  love you, and it would be a never ending list
from the simple things you do for me to all our first amazing kiss.
I've never been in love like this I mean the way you make me feel .
someone pinch me am I dreaming, please tell me this is real.
your always kind and gentle always opening my door, you make everything exciting when my life was just a bore
you always pick me flowers and pick me up when I feel down . and the comfort when you hold me that's a favorite I have found.
everytime you look at me I know your seeing me within that's the very reason when you look at me I always start to grin .
our love life is stupendous to the end right from the start. that's why I choose to give you the love within my heart.
know when it's my time to go I will go with no regrets
because I lived my life with you and that's as good as it can get
so Thanks my love being everything I'm not
 that's the reason you complete me and here's one final thought.
You will always mean the most to me my heart is yours and yours alone
All because the way you treat me and all the love you've shown .
as a token of my love to you I now wear  your name across my heart.
and to be quite honest with you I ve loved you from the start.
so here's to some thing priceless so beautiful and true .
a loving bond and shared life as one .
here's to me and you..


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Characters 1,350
Words 280
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,041
Words per stanza (avg) 288
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Submitted on February 14, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Brenda Hunt

I am a fun loving mother of three which are now grown I have 2 biolohocal grandchildren and seven step grandchildren. I have lived my life with love I've lived also with pain my writing are my coping mechanism to make it yhtough more…

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