Analysis of Sand and Time



I know in my heart nothing truly stays together
It is the illusion that our love will last truly forever
I am lucky for the time that as mortals we had
I would not trade a thing good or bad
You stole my heart you were my friend
I cherish our time together to the very end
With you I felt loved, needed I had a purpose
In the worst of times you showed me I was not worthless

I am reminded of a old saying. Death and life were talking. Life said death why am I love and yet you are hated?
Death said its quite simple. You are a beautiful lie
I on the other had am a ugly truth.


Scheme AABBCCDD XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110101010 11001011011110010 1110101111011 111101111 11111011 11010101010101 111111011010 0011111111110 11010101101010101111111011110 1111101101001 11010110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 567
Words 122
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 3
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 224
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Submitted by calvin_c on February 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Calvin W. Crenshaw

A 61 year old conservationist living in the Appalachian mountains of North Georgia. Being disabled writing has helped me reflect and heal. I feel I have a greater understanding of nature and the world around me. more…

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