Analysis of Being Immortal

Calvin W. Crenshaw 1959 (Atlanta)



To travel the world, so much to experience to taste, feel and see
I watch the earth evolve I see it grow  I ponder as to what it's outcome will finally be
In my time I have seen emperors  stand mighty and tall
Only to watch their vast kingdoms crumble and then fall
For constant never ending journeys I must forever go
Ever seeking knowledge as I watch the world change and grow
But for immortality  there is a painful price you will pay
As this is the way
For mortals in death their sins and mistakes are finally set free
But for the immortal all sins and regrets will last forever and stay with you for all eternity


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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 608
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 493
Words per stanza (avg) 122
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Submitted by calvin_c on January 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Calvin W. Crenshaw

A 61 year old conservationist living in the Appalachian mountains of North Georgia. Being disabled writing has helped me reflect and heal. I feel I have a greater understanding of nature and the world around me. more…

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