Analysis of My SUICIDE OBITUARY
Don't cry for me please, I do not want anyone to mourn, I was here in your present day, but its now that I'm gone, Memories live although the flesh must die, I had to go, If I couldn't live than I would just be here to survive, my spirit was way too enormous to stay, I was so limited in this earthly mudane place, I felt isolated in a world filled with space, had legs like Jackie Joyner but I couldn't run this race, now my emojis are smiley face, God has me in a better place, I'm at peace im with his grace, I could've stayed & maybe caught a case, with walls around me stagnating, my ability to create, mold and shape, turn me from human being to being an ape, losing my mind can you help me to locate, God Almighty Devine, this place can dull your mind, take your glow & dim your shine, take me leaving as a sign, I'm a part of God's Perfect Design, remember I Write and Rhyme, think of me as the morning sunshine, life & death is just a fleshly thin line, hide me in your heart just in case you lose your mind, I will forever be here like dimensions of time.
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Metre | 111111111101111101101111111100110111111111101111111101110111010111111000110111110000111111110101110111111110111100101111111110011010111011101010010110111110101101110111111111010011111111111111110101101110101010110111110101111101111101110111111101011101011 |
Characters | 1,081 |
Words | 214 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 1 |
Lines Amount | 1 |
Letters per line (avg) | 817 |
Words per line (avg) | 218 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 817 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 218 |
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