Analysis of My Rap

Deshawn Yeldell 1977 (Huntsville)



My Rap,
Can I fly Can I fly,
I wonder why they don’t want to see me fly,
My my my,
I wonder why,
all I get is evil eyes; it ain’t fair but It comes from the squares,
I look up the stairs fall to my knees and give a prayer,
My my my,
I wonder why they label me a street dude,
My my my;
I wonder why,
could it be; because I’m writing gangsta rhymes,
My my my all I get is the evil eye,
My my my listen to my rap,
Now can I fly?
-MillYentei


Scheme abbBBcdBeBBfbabe
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111111 11011111111 111 1101 1111101111111101 1110111110101 111 11011101011 111 1101 11101110101 11111110101 11110111 1111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 431
Words 100
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 317
Words per stanza (avg) 100
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Deshawn Yeldell

Wordsmith, ghostwriter, Book of Riffz_Muzik Author, Creative artist, African-American poet, Bagman designs.... DY_ MillYentei From Texas more…

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