Analysis of New Version, The



A soldier of the Russians
Lay japanned at Tschrtzvkjskivitch,
There was lack of woman's nursing
And other comforts which
Might add to his last moments
And smooth the final way;
But a comrade stood beside him
To hear what he might say.
The japanned Russian faltered
As he took that comrade's hand,
And he said: "I never more shall see
My own, my native land;
Take a message and a token
To some distant friends of mine,
For I was born at Smnlxzrskgqrxzski,
Fair Smnlxzrskgqrxzski on the Irkztrvzkimnov."


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHIHJKCL
Poetic Form
Metre 0101010 1111 11111010 010101 1111110 010101 1011011 111111 011010 111111 011110111 111101 10100010 1110111 111111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 486
Words 89
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 400
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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