Analysis of Asking in Vain

Charles Harpur 1813 (Windsor) – 1868 (Australia)



Still his little grave she seeketh
   In her mother-sorrow wild,
Hush! While in her heart she speaketh
   To the spirit of her child:
“Were we not to one another
   Once the sum of all sweet gain?
Say then—say unto thy mother,
   Shall we ever meet again?
   Darling, shall we meet again,
Knowing, loving one another?
“Ah! What weary, weary sorrows
   Have I known through loss of thee,
And what comfortless to-morrows
   Wait me in this misery!
Were we not to one another
   Once the sum of all sweet gain?
Say then—say unto thy mother,
   Shall we ever meet again?
   Darling, shall we meet again,
Knowing, loving one another?”

But the wind alone is heard
   Sighing in reply,
Where the long grave-grass is stirred
   As it floweth by.


Scheme ababCDCEECfafxCDCEEC ghgh
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 0010101 1100111 1010101 01111010 1011111 11110110 1110101 1011101 10101010 11101010 1111111 01111 1101100 01111010 1011111 11110110 1110101 1011101 10101010 1010111 10001 1011111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 756
Words 130
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 20, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 272
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Charles Harpur

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