Analysis of Tomorrow Ill Promised



Bubblewrapped children
  disparate hope

Spirits in limbo
  shortest of ropes

Control and protection
  their meaning belies

Tomorrow ill promised
 —eternity cries

(Villanova Pennsylvania: November, 2018)


Scheme AX XX AB XB X
Poetic Form
Metre 110 1001 10010 1011 010010 11001 01110 01001 010010010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 196
Words 25
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on December 01, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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