Analysis of Something More



Writing my way into eternity,
  I chose one word at a time

Doing my best to avoid modernity
  with rhythm and often rhyme

Staying true to all my senses
  shunning the critic and praiser alike

My pen only full of the truest ink
  to guide me through the night

Writing my way into eternity
  each phrase a step to climb

Caring not a whit for posterity,
  all applause I’ve left behind

The light’s become my master
  all time its servant—slave

As I write and speak to something more
 —than gets buried in the grave

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2018)


Scheme Ab ab xx xx Ab ax xc xc x
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010100 1111101 10111010100 1100101 10111110 100100101 1110110101 111101 1011010100 110111 1010110100 1011101 0101110 111101 111011101 1110001 0100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 541
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 10, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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