Analysis of Toll Mine To Pay



My road deeply potholed,
  with those left behind

Resurfaced with pain,
  all casualties mine

A road often fatal,
  to family and friends

No roses to line it,
  as it twisted and bent

When forced to look back,
  I see nothing but blood

From my hands to the cradle,
  on those that I’ve loved

If you ask me my reason

for acting this way

With eyes straight ahead,
  I’d have nothing to say

With the road getting shorter,
  compressed in the light

Behind me those bodies,
  that questioned my flight

The deeper I travel,
  newer endings begin

This toll mine to pay
 —heading further within

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2017)


Scheme XX XX AX XX XX AX X B XB XC XC AD BD X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 11101 11101 01011 110001 011010 110001 110111 111001 11111 111011 1111010 11111 1111110 11011 11101 111011 1011010 01001 011110 11011 010110 101001 11111 101001 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 607
Words 108
Sentences 1
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on July 19, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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