Analysis of last time
At 90 the man feels the day piece by piece
action and reaction
movement has become pain
and the pain grates his temperament
It shortens his stride
and lowers the veil
to reveal the man inside
watching him from a distance
i see him gaze longingly
through years to find himself now
looking up he studies the room around him
taking in each detail to complete another picture
glancing round at a sea of faces
he is treading water now
holding on
this man
my father
sits stage left in the final act
sentence by sentence he is making his last speech
there is sorrow and understanding and truth
finally
he has known death all his life
they have moved through the years
like a moth and a light
now face to face
they are close to parting
circling forebodingly with the finale in sight
Scheme | XXXXAXA XBCXDXCX XDXXXB XXEXXE |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101101111 100010 101011 00111100 11011 01001 1010101 1011010 1111100 1111011 10111001011 10010110101010 101101110 1110101 101 11 110 11100101 101101110111 1110001001 100 1111111 111101 101001 1111 111110 10011001001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 753 |
Words | 145 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 8, 6, 6 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 158 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
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Submitted on January 18, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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