Analysis of Mi Estrella Brillante … 0610-2k12



(my brilliant star who is no more……a sad poem)

Life is a rainbow
With countless vibrant shades
but many to eyes hidden
toil endless with their spades

Life is a rainbow
with vibrant colors and hues
some dreams die too young
to savor the morning dews

Life is a rainbow
with merry laughs and smiles
many in darkened corners
cough on fractured tiles

Life is a rainbow
brimming with bold and young
cast over board are
so many heroes unsung

Life maybe a rainbow
And clarion, the coo of a dove
in lonesome dark skies
circles my tireless lost love

Original
06 Sep,2012
Islamabad.


Scheme x Abxb Acdc Aexe Adxd afxf xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 110111110110 1101 110101 1101110 110111 1101 1101001 11111 1100101 1101 110101 1001010 11101 1101 101101 11011 1101001 11001 010001101 01011 10110011 0100 1 0100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 564
Words 107
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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