Analysis of Ghazal 03

Shams al-Din Hafiz 1315 (Shiraz) – 1390 (Shiraz)



That beautiful Shirazi Turk, took control and my heart stole,
I'll give Samarkand & Bukhara, for her Hindu beauty mole.
O wine-bearer bring me wine, such wine not found in Heavens
By running brooks,  in flowery fields, spend your days and stroll.
Alas, these sweet gypsy clowns, these agitators of our town
Took the patience of my heart, like looting Turks take their toll.
Such unfinished love as ours, the Beloved has no need,
For the Perfect Beauty, frills and adornments play no role.
I came to know Joseph's goodness, that daily would increase
Even the chaste Mistress succumbed to the love she would extol.
Whether profane or even cursed, I'll reply only in praise
Sweetness of tongue and the lips, even bitterness would enthrall.
Heed the advice of the wise, make your most endeared goal,
The fortunate blessed youth, listen to the old wise soul.
Tell tales of song and wine, seek not secrets of the world,
None has found and no-one will, knowledge leaves this riddle whole.
You composed poems and sang, Hafiz, you spent your days well
Venus wedded to your songs, in the firmaments' inverted bowl.

© Shahriar Shahriari
Los Angeles, Ca
October 18, 1999


Scheme AAXAXAXAXAXAAAXAXA BXB
Poetic Form
Metre 110001011010111 11101101101 11101111111010 11010100111101 011110111001101 10101111101111 10101110001111 100110101111 11111010110101 100110011011101 100111011011001 10110011010011 1001101111011 0100111010111 1111011110101 11101111011101 1011001111111 10101110010101 11 11001 010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,148
Words 201
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 18, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 458
Words per stanza (avg) 100
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shams al-Din Hafiz

Khwāja Shams-ud-Dīn Muḥammad Ḥāfeẓ-e Shīrāzī (Persian: خواجه شمس‌‌الدین محمد حافظ شیرازی‎), known by his pen name Hafez (حافظ, Ḥāfeẓ, 'the memorizer; the (safe) keeper' and as "Hafiz", was a Persian poet who "lauded the joys of love and wine but also targeted religious hypocrisy". more…

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