Analysis of With Drake in the Tropics

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



South and far south below the Line,
  Our Admiral leads us on,
Above, undreamed-of planets shine--
  The stars we know are gone.
Around, our clustered seamen mark
  The silent deep ablaze
With fires, through which the far-down shark
  Shoots glimmering on his ways.

The sultry tropic breezes fail
  That plagued us all day through;
Like molten silver hangs our sail,
  Our decks are dark with dew.
Now the rank moon commands the sky.
  Ho! Bid the watch beware
And rouse all sleeping men that lie
  Unsheltered in her glare.

How long the time 'twixt bell and bell!
  How still our lanthorns burn!
How strange our whispered words that tell
  Of England and return!
Old towns, old streets, old friends, old loves,
  We name them each to each,
While the lit face of Heaven removes
  Them farther from our reach.

Now is the utmost ebb of night
  When mind and body sink,
And loneliness and gathering fright
  O'erwhelm us, if we think--
Yet, look, where in his room apart,
  All windows opened wide,
Our Admiral thrusts away the chart
  And comes to walk outside.

Kindly, from man to man he goes,
  With comfort, praise, or jest,
Quick to suspect our childish woes,
  Our terror and unrest.
It is as though the sun should shine--
  Our midnight fears are gone!
South and far south below the Line,
  Our Admiral leads us on!


Scheme ABacdede fgfghihi jkjkxlxl mnmnopop qrqracAB
Poetic Form Etheree  (38%)
Metre 10110101 10100111 01011101 011111 011010101 010101 110110111 1100111 01010101 111111 110101101 1011111 10110101 110101 01110111 1001 11011101 111011 111010111 110001 11111111 111111 101111001 1101101 1101111 110101 010001001 11111 11101101 110101 1010010101 011111 10111111 110111 110110101 1010001 11110111 101111 10110101 10100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,290
Words 232
Sentences 15
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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