Analysis of The Totem

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



Ere the mother's milk had dried
  On my lips the Brethren came--
Tore me from my nurse's side,
  And bestowed on me a name

Infamously overtrue--
  Such as "Bunny," "Stinker," "Podge";--
But, whatever I should do,
  Mine for ever in the Lodge.

Then they taught with palm and toe--
  Then I learned with yelps and tears--
All the Armoured Man should know
  Through his Seven Secret Years...

Last, oppressing as oppressed,
  I was loosed to go my ways
With a Totem on my breast
  Governing my nights and days--

Ancient and unbribeable,
  By the virtue of its Name--
Which, however oft I fell,
  Lashed me back into The Game.

And the World, that never knew,
  Saw no more beneath my chin
Than a patch of rainbow-hue,
  Mixed as Life and crude as Sin.


Scheme ABAB XCDC EXEX FGFG HBHB DIDI
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 1010111 1110101 1111101 0011101 11 111011 110111 1110001 1111101 1111101 101111 1110101 1010101 1111111 1010111 1001101 1001 1010111 110111 1110101 0011101 1110111 101111 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 731
Words 138
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 31, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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