Analysis of The Song Of The Blindman
Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)
I am blind, you out there -- that is a curse,
against one's will, a contradiction,
a heavy daily burden.
I lay my hand on the arm of my wife,
my grey hand upon her greyer grey,
as she guides me through empty spaces.
You move about and stir, and imagine
your sounds differing from stone to stone.
But you are mistaken: I alone
live and suffer and complain, for
in me is an endless crying,
and I do not know whether it is
my heart that cries or my bowels.
Do you recognize these songs? You never sang them,
not quite with this intonation.
For you every morning brings its new light
warm through your open windows.
And you have the feeling from face to face
that tempts you to be indulgent.
Translated by Albert Ernest Flemming
Scheme | XAAXXX ABBXCXX XAXXXX C |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (30%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 1111111101 01110010 0101010 1111101111 11101011 111111010 1101010010 111001111 111010101 10100011 01111010 011111011 11111110 11101111011 11110010 11100101111 1111010 0110101111 11111010 0101101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 713 |
Words | 140 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 7, 6, 1 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 141 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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