Analysis of Abishag

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



I
She lay, and serving-men her lithe arms took,
And bound them round the withering old man,
And on him through the long sweet hours she lay,
And little fearful of his many years.

And many times she turned amidst his beard
Her face, as often as the night-owl screeched,
And all that was the night around them reached
Its feelers manifold of longing fears.

As they had been the sisters of the child
The stars trembled, and fragrance searched the room,
The curtain stirring sounded with a sign
Which drew her gentle glances after it.

But she clung close upon the dim old man,
And, by the night of nights not over-taken,
Upon the cooling of the King she lay
Maidenly, and lightly as a soul.

II
The King sate thinking out the empty day
Of deeds accomplished and untasted joys,
And of his favorite bitch that he had bredC
But with the evening Abishag was arched
Above him. His disheveled life lay bare,
Abandoned as diffamed coasts, beneath
The quiet constellation of her breasts.

But many times, as one in women skilled,
he through his eyebrows recognized the mouth
Unmoved, unkissed; and saw: the comet green
Of her desired reached not to where he lay.
He shivered. And he listened like a hound,
And sought himself in his remaining blood.


Scheme ABCDE XFFE XXXX CXDX ADXBXXXX XXXDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1101010111 0111010011 01110111011 0101011101 0101110111 0111010111 0111010111 110101101 1111010101 0110010101 0101010101 1101010101 1111010111 01011111010 0101010111 1010101 1 0111010101 11010011 01110011111 11010111 0111010111 01011101 010010101 1101110101 11111001 011010101 10010111111 1100110101 0101010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,217
Words 224
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 8, 6
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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