Analysis of Hawaiian

Padraic Colum 1881 (County Longford) – 1972 (Enfield)



SANDALWOOD, you say, and in your thoughts it chimes
With Tyre and Solomon; to me it rhymes
With places bare upon Pacific mountains,
With spaces empty in the minds of men.

Sandalwood!
The Kings of Hawaii call out their men,
The men go up the mountains in files;
Hands that knew only the stone axe now wield the iron axe:
The sandalwood trees go down.

More sandalwood is called for:
The men who hunt the whale will buy sandalwood;
The Kings would change canoes for ships.
Men come down from the mountains carrying sandalwood on their backs;
More and more men are levied;
They go up the mountains in files; they leave their taropatches so that famine comes down on the land.

But this sandalwood grows upon other trees, a parasite;
It needs a growing thing to grow upon;
Its seed and its soil are not enough for it!

Too greedy are the Kings;
Too eager are the men who hunt the whale to sail to
Canton with fragrant wood to make shrines for the
Buddhas;
Too sharp is the iron axe!

Nothing will ever bring together again
The spores and the alien sap that nourished them,
The trees and the trees they would plant themselves
upon:
Like the myths of peoples,
Like the faiths of peoples,
Like the speech of peoples,
Like the ancient creation chants,
The sandalwood is gone!

A fragrance in shrines
But the trees will never live again!


Scheme AAXB CBXDX XCXDCC CEC XCXAD BXXEFFFXX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 111001111 1101001111 11010101010 1101000111 1 011011111 011101001 11110011110101 01111 11111 011101111 01110111 11110101001111 1011110 111010011111111011101 111101101010 1101011101 11011110111 110101 1101011101111 10110111110 1 1110101 10110101001 010010011101 0100111101 01 101110 101110 101110 10100101 0111 01001 101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,298
Words 244
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 6, 3, 5, 9, 2
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Padraic Colum

Padraic Colum was an Irish poet, novelist, dramatist, biographer, playwright, children's author and collector of folklore. more…

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