Analysis of my true self



Dark thoughts invading my brain

I want sunshine not rain

I think of things I'm grateful for

but still the sadness is in my core

I cannot weep

I cannot cry

My very soul just wants to die

I've lived this way too many years

I am completely devoid of tears

My thoughts, my hopes have turned to fears

My laughter now is only jeers

Still I find I reach for the rainbow

I reach for the sun and bask in its glow

I tell myself some day this will end

My true self will emerge and again be my friend


Scheme A A B B X C C D X D X E E F F
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011 11111 11111101 110101011 1101 1101 11011111 11111101 110100111 11111111 11011101 11111101 1110101011 11111111 111101001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 540
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

I was thinking about the life I presently have and the life I envisioned for myself and still hope for. this poem came out of that

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Written on May 07, 2024

Submitted by nanrobison on May 07, 2024

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nancy robison

Nancy Robison is a retired teacher. She has written 2 children's books a young adult book , a book of poetry and a parenting book. All are available on Amazon. Profits from all of her books are donated to charity. the children's books are about a cat named Stubby and profits from these books are given to animal charities as are the profits from The Dogs of My Life. Profits from the sale of the parenting book Wisdom of Our Parents is given to St. Judes children's hospital. Profits from the sale of the poetry book- Poems from the Heart are donated to ALS of Michigan. more…

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