Analysis of Evilness Inflicted



Evilness.
And the wickedness of it.
Seems a permanent infliction.
For the ones,
Living their innocent lives.
Suffering through,
What those thoughtless...
Pick and choose to do this to!
With time to use to abuse others.

Although time like this,
Enjoyed to dismiss...
Is a man-made activity.
Committed to 'assume',
An evil inflicted to exist...
Has no ending to it.
As if faith kept is a valueless undertaking.
A waste of praying.
To The Almighty Creator.
Unseen yet very aware.
More powerful than a judge or jury.
And...
Eventually proving to be prepared.
Without notice to deliver,
A serving to those wicked and evil.
Unaware nor prepared.
For what it is God does,
To blinded minds finding time to define...
The wishes of God.
Until out of their minds to deserve it seen,
Those claiming to be the chosen ones.
Permanently.
Were correct.
Left to witness and observed to be,
Crazed.
Mentally.
With no cure or remedy.
Isolated.
And alone.
As a wish to grant and receive publicly!

'This 'prophecy' is your opinion!'

I am not claiming to be a prophet.
I am just your average,
Conscious and opinionated observer.

'Well...
Keep your observations to yourself!'

For so long I have tried that.
But those out of their minds,
I can't avoid their attempts...
To normalized these times.
They find acceptable to ignore.
And I am not a fan of fiction that deludes,
Truth over reality as a way of life.
Messed up by many living in denial.
Drowning themselves in pretensions!

'That may be their choice to choose.'

I agree.
You get no argument from me.
Afterall...
We do live in a place,
In which entitlements are given.
As one chooses to use them.
Then protest to defend,
How they conduct their own...
Self destruction.

'Again...
That's your opinion.'

And again I will mention,
I am just an observer.
However...
There may be times my eyes to me lie.


Scheme ABCAADADA AAEXXBFFGXEXHGIHAXXXAEXEXEEXJE C XXG XX XAAAXAXIA A EEXACXXJC XC CGGX
Poetic Form Etheree  (26%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1 0010011 10100010 101 1011001 1001 1110 1011111 111110110 1111 01101 10110100 010101 110010101 111011 111110100100 01110 10010010 0111001 1100101110 0 01000101101 01101010 0101110010 01101 111111 1101101101 01011 01111110111 110110101 1000 001 111000111 1 100 1111100 100 001 10111001100 110011010 1111011010 1111100 1000100010 1 11010101 1111111 111111 1101101 11011 110100101 011101110101 1101010111 11110100010 10010010 1111111 101 11110011 10 111001 010100110 1110111 11101 110111 1010 01 11010 0011110 1111010 10 111111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,840
Words 398
Sentences 56
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 9, 30, 1, 3, 2, 9, 1, 9, 2, 4
Lines Amount 70
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on May 07, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 07, 2024

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