Analysis of There are no victories in war!



We may not always see eye to eye!
 We may not agree about the same things!
You may not like what I like!
 Yet, diffrences, are what make us both human!
You may eat what I do not!
 We may not even believe in the same God!
What makes either one of us wrong?
 To attack one another only makes us both brutish!
A few things we both should like!
 Peace and a chance to live grow, and, to, achieve, in peace!
The right to feel safe and thrive!
 Love brought us all together!
Hate just ruins it!
 At times we all may be wrong!
Living and learning is the part of life we should start choosing!
 For death lives with the unkind!
Hate only yeilds for hate!
 What future chance do we have to survive, if killing each other remains what humans are choosing?
At times, it's better to fold or seperate from negative over ruling!
 What life are we giving to our children, if, our only, answer, is, to, start shooting?
We should all think before we act at times!
 Reasoning, meaning, responding, is the one thing that seperates us from animals!
These are just facts!
 To simply state them is not accusing!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1110101011 1111111 111111110 1111111 11110010011 11101111 10110101011110 0111111 1001111010101 0111101 1111010 11101 1111111 100101011111110 1111001 110111 110111110111011001110110 11110111111001010 11111011010110101011110 1111011111 1001001010111111100 1111 1101111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,089
Words 228
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 831
Words per stanza (avg) 205

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A short poem reminding us peace brings peace!

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Written on May 07, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on May 07, 2024

Modified by devonb.14033 on May 07, 2024

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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