Analysis of My Whole



My soul knows of this love
I have never felt it in the flesh because it's sent from above
As a little girl I have always had this dream
Suffering through hell still wishing to be saved by my king
The sky is falling
I can hear him calling
I feel I am different from the rest
Not perfect
Humble knowing we are all blessed
Even when stressed
My whole the only man who understands my behavior
My mind will never be the same
My feelings are major
Even through all the rain and pain
My heart keeps growing
For my whole
My man
My king

ALK
Sunshine


Scheme AAXBBBCXCCDXDXBXXB BX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111111 1110110010111101 10101111111 10011110111111 01110 111110 1111100101 101 10101111 1011 1101011011010 11110101 110110 10110101 11110 111 11 11 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 542
Words 110
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 18, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Written on February 01, 2021

Submitted by amandak on May 03, 2024

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