Analysis of Soft and Sweet

Latin x 1967 (Philadelphia)



She was soft, she was sweet
Like warm bath water you’d want to immerse yourself in her beautiful brown skin

Two bodies making contact like the waves in the ocean
Oooo what motion

She was soft, she was sweet
I just want to trace her soft lips with my finger tips.  

She was soft she was sweet

Skin like cinnamon, hair dark and thick like mine. Lips like mine robust and full of fire
Breasts soft and tender
No one else feels like her
Kisses like her
No ones ever touched me like her

Bodies on fire wet with desire
How I longed to take my time with her
My senses don’t allow me

Our bodies moving in unison ending in what feels like a volcano erupting  
Oh but how soft and sweet it was…


Scheme Ax bb Ax A ccccc ccx xx
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111011101010010011 1101011010010 1110 111111 1111101111101 111111 111001101111110101110 11010 111110 1010 11101110 1011011010 111111110 1101011 1010100100100111001010 11110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 707
Words 154
Sentences 3
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 5, 3, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

One of my first poems I wrote. Also, my first erotic poem. Hope you enjoy it!

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Written on October 16, 2021

Submitted by LatinX on April 27, 2024

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