Analysis of Cold Notes on snowy tablet.



There are markings
Of a ferret chasing
A lunch or a torrid lover
To consummation.
Blue Jay draws
Snow angels
Wrestling with smaller
Ornithology.
For a choice nut.

Whining through pines
Just like queer musical score.
But the fragrance
In the air unforgettable.
There are suggestions of
That warmer summer's day.
Rains all past.
And hope for the
Furtive heart.

Strong as a sizzling fire
Neath glazed and
Dripping branch.


Scheme XXAXXXAXX XXXXXXXXX AXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 101010 01101010 1010 111 110 10110 0100 1011 1011 1111001 1010 0010100 110101 110101 111 0110 101 11010010 110 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 421
Words 81
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 9, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on April 26, 2024

Submitted by dougb.72572 on April 26, 2024

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