Analysis of One Of The Redeemed

Ambrose Bierce 1842 (Meigs County) – 1914 (Chihuahua)



Saint Peter, standing at the Gate, beheld
A soul whose body Death had lately felled.

A pleasant soul as ever was, he seemed:
His step was joyous and his visage beamed.

'Good morning, Peter.' There was just a touch
Of foreign accent, but not overmuch.

The Saint bent gravely, like a stately tree,
And said: 'You have the advantage, sir, of me.'

'Renan of Paris,' said the immortal part
'A master of the literary art.

'I'm somewhat famous, too, I grieve to tell,
As controversialist and infidel.'

'That's of no consequence,' the Saint replied,
'Why, I myself my Master once denied.

'No one up here cares anything for that.
But is there nothing you were always at?

'It seems to me you were accused one day
Of _something_-what it was I can't just say.'

'Quite likely,' said the other; 'but I swear
My life was irreproachable and fair.'

Just then a soul appeared upon the wall,
Singing a hymn as loud as he could bawl.

About his head a golden halo gleamed,
As well befitted one of the redeemed.

A harp he bore and vigorously thumbed,
Strumming he sang, and, singing, ever strummed.

His countenance, suffused with holy pride,
Glowed like a pumpkin with a light inside.

'Ah! that's the chap,' said Peter, 'who declares:
'Renan's a rake and drunkard-smokes and swears.'

'Yes, that's the fellow-he's a preacher-came
From San Francisco. Mansfield was his name.'

'Do you believe him?' said Renan. 'Great Scott!
Believe? Believe the blackguard? Of course _not!

'Just walk right in and make yourself at home.
And if he pecks at you I'll cut his comb.

'He's only here because the Devil swore
He wouldn't have him, for the smile he wore.'

Resting his eyes one moment on that proof
Of saving grace, the Frenchman turned aloof,

And stepping down from cloud to cloud, said he:
'Thank you, monsieur,-I'll see if he'll have _me_.'


Scheme AA AA BB CC AA DD AA AA AX EE FF AA AA AA GG HH AA II JJ KK CH
Poetic Form
Metre 110101011 0111011101 0101110111 1111001101 1101011101 11001111 0111010101 01110010111 1110100101 010101001 1111011111 11010 1111000101 111110101 111111011 111101011 1111100111 111111111 1101010111 111101 1101010101 1001111111 0111010101 11111001 0111010001 1011010101 1100011101 1101010101 1101110101 101010101 1101010101 110101111 110111111 010101111 1110010111 0111111111 1101010101 1101110111 1011110111 1101010101 0101111111 1101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,777
Words 334
Sentences 31
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:39 min read
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Ambrose Bierce

Ambrose Gwinnett Bierce was an American editorialist, journalist, short story writer, fabulist, and satirist. more…

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