Analysis of The Unknown Soldier



The Unknown Soldier

I am the Unknown Soldier and you’re standing on my grave
but please don't confuse me with one considered brave.
I was eighteen years old when I answered the call,
went over the top and one of the first to fall.
I didn't die a hero, indeed an inglorious death.
Calling out for my mother took my dying breath.
The bravest thing that I have ever done
is to tell my story in the shadow of the gun.

They took me from that foreign field where I met my doom
Scraped me into a box and brought me to this tomb
I have been on parade for a hundred years
Politicians and puppets and crocodile tears
The self-same people who determined my fate
blending ceremoniously with the good and the great
Their faces overcome by unmeasurable grief
I grin and bare it as I lay underneath

Please forgive me as I turn in my grave
observing these people and how they behave.
I must confess it's through gritted teeth
I watch them come forward and lay their wreath.
The humble poppy from those fields of green
A symbolic emblem turned money machine.
To our fallen soldiers for whom we cried for
Contradicting the values they thought they died for

I watched proudly as the parades went by,
my old comrades with their heads held high.
Alas, they are no longer that brave band of brothers.
Continually replaced by a brave band of others
I am sorry my comrades I have no wish to offend
but is it time for this charade to end.
Caught up in the euphoria of eternal grief.
I shake my head in disbelief.

And what about our one time foe,
our despised enemy from long ago.
With a tormented past she would rather forget.
Salting her wounds every opportunity we get.
With dignity and compassion she has led the way
In this troubled world we have today
The time has come to bury the past
And seek a peace designed to last

Please don’t imagine that I lack respect
If I do not behave as you might expect
We will never forget those who gave their lives
and never forget those grieving wives.
Those fatherless children and broken hearted mothers.
Devastated comrades, a broken band of brothers
If the drums of war would only cease
Then this Unknown Soldier and many others
would finally rest in peace.


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Poetic Form
Metre 00110 11001100110111 111011110101 110111111001 110010110111 110101001101001 101111011101 0101111101 111110001101 1111110111111 110101011111 11110110101 0100100101 01110101011 101101001 11010111 1101111101 1011111011 01011001101 11011111 1111100111 0101011111 00101011001 110101011111 01001011111 1110100111 11111111 0111110111110 0100011011110 1110111111101 1111110111 1100010010101 1111001 010110111 10011001101 10101111001 1001100010011 1100001011101 011011101 011111001 01010111 1101011101 11110111101 11100111111 010011101 1100100101010 10010101110 101111101 11011001010 1100101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,189
Words 433
Sentences 19
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 9
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 249
Words per stanza (avg) 58

About this poem

This is an anti war poem and conveys my feelings regarding all the remembrance ceremonies that takes place all over the world. I believe they glorify war and nothing more than a recruitment tool.

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Written on November 11, 2020

Submitted by Davyreilly on March 25, 2024

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