Analysis of Take My Mind To A Quiet Place



Please take my mind to a quiet place
Where there is no pain no hurried pace
And let me rest there for a while
Before I travel my next mile.

And when I once again proceed
Please give me all the strength I need
To face whatever I might find
With joy of heart and peace of mind.


Scheme AABB CCDD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111110101 111111101 01111101 01110111 01110101 11110111 1110111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 276
Words 60
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

I worked for hospice, and used this as a meditation to prepare me for the people and stories and tears I would hold in my heart every day. It hung above my desk for several years and still is there with my successor. I share it with friends going thru cancer treatments and other crises.

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Written on February 01, 2000

Submitted by dutchcooki on February 29, 2024

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Take my mind to a quiet place

I’ve written poetry since I was a child, as birthday cards, gifts, even a book report. A teacher allowed me to read some to the class as show and tell. I wrote a column in our local paper for 20 years, and while working for hospice, wrote song lyrics for departing staff members or med students on rotation. Words are very important to me. more…

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