Analysis of My heart speaks to you



What a dreadful sad day
Oh mothers, fathers, children
Your hearts are torn with sadness
Your weakened bodies are afraid
Your  sobbing tears are  crying out loud
Piercing  the distant hearts
Who received them with sobbing cries
Hoping with fear that every  beloved one will be find alive
Beneath these thousands of pillars

Searchers   found   living ones
Sadly they found thousands of dead and wounded ones Nothing is more recognizable nothing but  debris
Unforgettable are your  torments
In the hearts of those who know how to love
They don't care about race, creed or color
May the Lord send you by your side
Among those kind souls
To feel  your flames to feel your pain
May your palpable souls with  time ease your wounds Oh how I wish i can put flowers on their graves


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 781
Words 144
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 9
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 311
Words per stanza (avg) 74

About this poem

I dedicated this poem to all the ones who lost their beloved ones in wars and in natural disasters. I wrote I 3 languages : English , French and Arabic and I em planing to write it in Italian and Spanish to reach much more hearts .

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Written on September 23, 2024

Submitted by Sshebany on February 27, 2024

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Salwa Sheibany

Salwa Sheibany is an American- Arab writer, who writes in five languages, English, French, Italian and Arabic. and Spanish She is also a lecturer with an extensive teaching experience in university level. She received her masters degree in French Literature ar the University of Virginia. She served as director and judge for the International Film Festival. Among her plentiful gifts she has an eye for photography inspired by her passion of the sky and nature. Writing poetry is her new journey into enlightenment and spiritual awakening. She was mentored in Arabic by the Egypitan poet and author Essama Chiba, an accomplished writer who is published worldwide. Salwa is blessed to be a mother of two, they are her pride and joy. more…

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