Analysis of Lift up your loving

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Lift up your loving

Lift your tears up to the sky so the rain may use them. Put a song in your heart and offer it to the Heavens to hold favor to those we've lost. In our minds memory of them will keep them alive in our hearts and forever capture their influence to all those left behind. There is a never ending power in memories made with love. Look to the stars for each twinkle is a wink from the Heavens attached to our lost and fallen.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 1 11110 1111101101111101011010110101110111101011001111101010100101011001111011101010100100111110111101011010011101010
Characters 455
Words 91
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 120
Words per line (avg) 30
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Written on June 07, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on April 07, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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