Analysis of Ode to the Fallen



Oh, marvellous light  
Your glory bright  
That once shone where  
The poppies grew.  

Such precious lives
Lie buried low  
In Flanders Fields  
Where daffs now grow.  

Old bones rest on
Their souls long gone      
Hold in mind      
Of what went wrong.

They had their dreams
But blooded scenes
In wars fought hard
Left bloodshed scars.       

Their lives so lost
Youth, dreams, hope, love
All now resting
In realms above.

So now residing
In Heaven blessed
In enchanted light
They reminisce.             


Scheme AAXX XBXB XXXX XXXX XCDC DXAX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 111 1101 1111 0101 1101 1101 0101 1111 1111 1111 101 1111 1111 1101 0111 111 1111 1111 1110 0101 11010 0101 00101 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 509
Words 97
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

A simplistic reminder that war is harsh. In recognition of ANZAC Day 2024 when we remember those Australian and New Zealand heroes who fell at Gallipoli.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 05, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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